Commuting Without Air Conditioning:
A Haiku
Sweaty, loud yuppies
It’s days like this when I think
Yo, fuck you suburbs
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nikkidoughnuts said:
Truly profound.
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vpowinsf said:
Does this shit happen on subways too?!!! It’s been “warm” lately - 69 glorious degrees. :)
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theramblingark said:
Master o’ the Haiku.
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oxymoronicromantic reblogged this from lazydad and added:
Count blessings, ‘Jersey It’s worse in Oklahoma The temp is one ten
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granola-mama said:
Natural-born poet.
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momlyfe said:
better or worse than commuting with sweaty loud inner city teenagers?
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sheslump said:
I beg to differ. I give you an A for your haiku. You followed standard English haiku structure pretty well. Right on 5-7-5 syllables, season words and sensory imagery. HIGH FIVE!
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